tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578299375433383985.post5782424505300182241..comments2024-03-14T00:16:58.277-07:00Comments on Ordinary Guy: Patch, Part 3Tim O'Keefehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12653709506879101775noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578299375433383985.post-59786735781675924982011-02-27T14:36:17.251-08:002011-02-27T14:36:17.251-08:00I, on the other hand, would have liked to see Patc...I, on the other hand, would have liked to see Patch find some success there at the end. You know, maybe man and horse lying side-by-side at the water's edge - on the brink of death. I don't necessarily like cruel endings, I just like that others hate them so.<br /><br />I really enjoyed the story. I've never written anything even a third that long. Impressive. I'd like to one day write a short story. However, I'll really have to work at developing a bit more stamina!Mr. Hass' Classhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01966423580619691843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578299375433383985.post-89502422020920808082011-02-21T16:11:24.148-08:002011-02-21T16:11:24.148-08:00Excellent share. I really enjoyed the lead up to t...Excellent share. I really enjoyed the lead up to the end. When the gun didn't fire, I cheered a YES out loud. Such a cool story.Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04052647782617418115noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5578299375433383985.post-48664855675698656972011-02-20T16:45:15.272-08:002011-02-20T16:45:15.272-08:00Good story!Good story!Mamafamiliashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04642279230675116567noreply@blogger.com